only problem is I'm not quite sure what it means. And it's not the first time that's happened. Sometimes I wish I could just understand what I write....
"Clarity Eludes"
Clarity Eludes
words twist in and out
they form in funny patterns
in my head
Sensibility
must be a lost art
that I forgot from my childhood
or maybe never learned
*all that's in here
is empty
and all that's missing
is what I want
words and pages
turn and linger
start suddenly
end abruptly*
all's confusion
I know not what I want anymore
I don't want to try to find the words
to write it down
Hesitation
fear of loss, loss of love
loss of life, loss of mind,
loss of you
**
Anyway. Until next time.
~Haleyknitz 
Lovely poem. :-) Sounds to me like you're confused. And maybe you have things to say but can't find the right words to say them.
ReplyDeleteDon't you hate it when you write things down and then forget what they mean?
I don't know what to think of it either. But I like it. I'm going to have to come back later and re-read it.
ReplyDeleteBut anyhoo, I really like it. Maybe you should write things at 11:30 more often haha.
Merry Early Turkey Day!
~Lindsay
JABA
I think I've felt this way before?
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